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Coming out of his shell by TF-Wizard Coming out of his shell by TF-Wizard
A fun, easy to write caption for me. It is the last of the commissions sent to me by the always amazing :iconkyoshira71: I really hope all of you like the story!

As always, I do not own this picture nor claim to own it.
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:iconandyofindiana:
AndyofIndiana Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm pretty shy too, but I wouldn't like the color of that bikini.  I would prefer a bikini top and bottom that were two different (and brighter) colors.  In this case, I would like a green top and a blue bottom.  Grey and white doesn't really appeal to me.
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Physcomatter313 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
.......... Angel, (Umbreons Girlfriend), would not appreciate me talking to someone like Samantha.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015
Lol. I'm sure.
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:icontgxd-fan:
TGXD-Fan Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
Omg, yes! I love any good story with a shy boy and a girl friend, whether they fall in love, she tries to help him, etc. LOVED IT!!!
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sallyane Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
ah yes a great freindshipstory love the cap if only it was me wow well done
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jaynemaria Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
a good well writton cap love the story line wow if only
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:iconch1bikuro:
Ch1biKuro Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
Daaaw isnt this cute x3
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:iconbeetlelion12:
beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I'm saying her beauty would freeze me once and I couldn't anything. I'm shy as h*** around hot chicks. 
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
I suppose so lol.
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:iconbeetlelion12:
beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
Do I would in front of Samantha? Her beauty would petrify me!!!
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Er, um, yeah?
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beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
If you don't understand what I meant, I meant that I would be petrified by Samantha's beauty. If you did understand me then don't judge me, she's hotter than hell.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Heh, she is pretty hot lol.
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:iconbeetlelion12:
beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
I know right.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Heh.
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:iconbeetlelion12:
beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
If you don't understand what I mean, then forget what i wrote
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
Er...I think I understand now.
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:iconbeetlelion12:
beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
If you don't understand me I meant to say I'd be petrified by Samantha' s beauty. But if you did understand me, then don't judge, I'm lonely.
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Fast-Runner-2024 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Will there be a sequel??

im pretty sure that's nibutani shinka from chuunibyou
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Hm...I'm not planning on a sequel no. I had no idea who the picture was of to be honest.
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Fast-Runner-2024 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
well it still goes very well with the story!! XD
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Thanks!
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:iconleafbladie:
leafbladie Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
I think that's Asuna from Sword Art Online.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
It could be...I've never watched the show.
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:iconjack-o-lance:
Jack-O-Lance Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Not bad, very intriguing! :clap:
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconjack-o-lance:
Jack-O-Lance Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:thumbsup: No prob.
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DavisWTG Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah yeah, that kind of caption in which the main character stays the way he/she is even after the changes, instead of what most captions do by suddenly having a huge change (of course, ignoring the captions that involve mind control, bimbofication and anything else along that line) in the characters behavior. Certainly an approach that I prefer, since it would be the most logical option if something like this would even happen to a random person.

Anyways, about the caption. Eh, I guess I'm repeating myself by now, but still, nice caption that isn't only a change, but rather has a story to go along with it, well written as usual, easily readable both in terms of writing and in terms of design. Personally, I know the type of person Sam is, so I can definitely relate a bit to what Elizabeth is trying to do, trying to get him a bit out of his shell... well, even if that is an unique approach.
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TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
It certainly is a unique approach, I guess she's kind of a unique gall...
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:iconrhys1010:
Rhys1010 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Ah, what a pair of friends they are.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Yup! They were fun to write about!
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:iconrhys1010:
Rhys1010 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Yay.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
Sweet.
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Kiroku09 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great work! Samantha will eventually break through, with a freind like Elizabeth on her side.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Seems that way yes.
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:iconkiroku09:
Kiroku09 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good, being a little shy is okay but being too shy isn't.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
True, true.
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Kiroku09 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha, yeah! When my brother was little he was the shyest person around but when he finnally broke his shell, he's now able to make anyone laugh. Now, he's allways got this goofy smile on his face even in the worst of circumstances.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Heh! That's cool!
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:iconkiroku09:
Kiroku09 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, yeah it is.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Say hi to your brother then.
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PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
'Then Elizabeth pushed Sam in'

XD, I think of this: mangafox.me/manga/double_arts/…
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Which manga was that?
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PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
You...didn't see the title? A little known gem called Double Arts. One of only three pieces of Japanese literature I can stomach. I HATE Anime and I hate Manga, but Double Arts, the World God Only Knows, and Claymore alone get passes.

TOO BAD IT WASN'T SHOENEN ENOUGH FOR THAT JUMP MAGAZINE SO THEY CANCELLED IT. GODDAMMIT.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Wow, why do you hate Anime/Manga so much? I'm rather curious. Although TWGOK is by far one of my favorite works.
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PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Sexism, the tropes, that kinda thing. I have a huge golden rule. Only The World God Only Knows got away with not having it.

The female lead MUST be the main character. Not the man, the woman.

The female lead MUST be badass. She isn't a damsel, and if she is, other badass women save her, and she SHOWS that she is capable outside of the kidnapping.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Interesting ideas. Does that apply to western works as well?
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:iconpascalofpiers:
PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Yes XD.
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:icontf-wizard:
TF-Wizard Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Dang, you must miss out on a LOT of stuff then.
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luvinanime25 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
even through TG, you can't easily change someone when they are stuck in their ways. The picture, if I am not mistaken...and I don't think I am, is of Asuna from Sword Art Online. Is it not? 
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